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I am hugely intrigued by your fic.

You convey the different relationships between characters very aptly. It’s an impressive skill to retain a character’s personality despite markedly different contexts, and there’s always a clear voice in your dialogue, which doesn’t seem to be compromised by the situation.

However, the thing I like best about this piece has to be the balance you’ve struck between Matt and his infernal passenger. The degree to which he’s surrendered to his vengeful impulses and the amount of humanity he retains is just gorgeous. Father Lanthom’s perspective was an extremely useful framing tool that managed to convey a lot of the subtlety in their symbiosis. Your writing in general contains a lot of evocative detail that doesn’t cross the line into flowery or excessive description. I think this is largely to do with the way you blend believable dialogue with interesting body language and expression cues. It just fits together nicely in way that contributes to the flow of the language.

I am enjoying your work immensely and I look forward to its continuation.

By-the-by, would you consider updating your entry in the WIP thread to reflect your new post? I came across your latest updates entirely by coincidence.

Ugh, brain fade. I always forget to update the WIP thread but I will jump on that right now- thanks for the reminder.

And thank you too for the feedback; I'm always concerned with trying to keep the voices recognizable in such new contexts so it's always good to hear when that is actually succeeding.

"Infernal passenger", I do like your turn of phrase and it couldn't be more apt. That's one of the things I really wanted to play with, Matt's humanity, that is. He's so concerned with it in the show, but he always has that little edge of temptation I kind of want him to step over.

All that said, I'm glad you're enjoying so much and here's the next entry! :)

Prompt Post #4

Re: The Devil's Due Part 1.4

Re: The Devil's Due Part 1.4