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Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-08 03:51 am (UTC)(link)OH GODS. *refreshes page all night*
THIS IS SO GOOD. ALSO I'M GONNA CRY.
They also got separate apartments for the first time since meeting, and that was honestly the hardest thing for Foggy to adjust to. He missed Matt, missed his company and his humour, but Matt insisted that it was the best thing to do. His real ‘business’ in Hell’s Kitchen had started picking up, so it would be safer for Foggy to keep a little bit of distance.
Yeah good luck trying to convince yourself you’re not falling in the demon equivalent of love with Foggy, dude.
but he couldn’t make himself say no to the food that would magically appear in his refrigerator or the waivers he got on late penalties for his bills.
Not even in the underworld and you’re eating his food. NICE GOING FOGGY.
That said, Matt didn’t always abuse his powers. He regularly forgot to eat, he didn’t always remember to heal his body, his real job seemed to involve a lot less deal-making and a lot more face-breaking, and it turned out that he really, actually was completely blind.
Gods this is such a great story you’re conveying here. Seriously.
(“I told you my other senses were stronger than yours,” he reminded the first time Foggy tried getting them to watch a movie. “My vision is not one of them. A movie reads as a flat surface to me.” “Huh. Okay. Well, we’ll stay in and I’ll narrate for you. It’s Star Wars, man—you can’t live on Earth and not experience George Lucas!”)
Awwwwwww.
Seven years went by. Eight. Ten.
Foggy was happy.
Which means it’s TIME TO DIE.
*rubs hands together with glee*
… I’m sorry, I’m just … yeah.
Foggy thought he’d been ready.
In truth, he’d probably just been in denial.
Yep. : D I’m probably a sadist but I’m enjoying this WAY TOO MUCH.
He took a deep breath and was alarmed when a terrified squeak came out against his intentions. “Oh, god. Is it going to hurt?”
*tugs at collar* Hnnngghhh.
I mean, um, how … horrible …
“The… you actually have Hellhounds? You sic Hellhounds on people?”
Matt froze. “Uh. Nope. Of course not.”
Foggy glared at him judgingly. “I’m glaring at you judgingly.”
I’m laughing but also really invested in this tense scene.
“You are such a bad liar!”
Matt deflated. “Only around you,” he mourned. “We’ve spent too much time around each other. You put my guard down. I’m going to be a laughingstock when we Descend.”
*sporfles* Oh boys.
Hang on … Matt is the Devil here, right? Not just some random demon? He’s actually Satan, right?
His knees gave out, but Matt caught him before he could hit the floor. He didn’t show off his inhuman strength often—in part because he’d been convincingly playing the role of a squishy human pincushion for a decade now, and in part because he thought it was funny to watch Foggy trip or drop things or fall off ledges—but it seemed like the entire façade really was ready to blow.
Oooooo, I love that. That Matt’s human suit is slipping.
“Can—what’s—is my soul going to be absorbed?”
Matt started. “What?”
“Or is the eternity of torture thing literal?”
“It is, but Foggy—”
“Am I—I’m not going to see my dad, am I?”
Ok, 1) my heart is breaking 2) I’m really getting off on this and 3) Matt you asshole did you FORGET to tell Foggy you’re not just dumping him in a lava pit when this is over?
Foggy clung to him, knowing it would be the last time he’d ever feel the obnoxiously, adorably pretentious silk of Matt’s shirt. Giving up on trying to pretend to be brave, he tucked his eyes against Matt’s shoulder and cried.
And cried.
And cried.
When he was all cried out, he drifted back into awareness to feel Matt rocking him back and forth. “Am I dead yet?”
Matt snorted, the puff of air brushing over the top of his ear. “I wasn’t going to extract your soul while you were crying on me,” he drawled, although his expression was still one of concern.
Auuuuuuuuuwwwwww! I wanna hug Foggy, and cry and I’m also still really, really into this.
“Foggy,” Matt called again, softer this time. “Don’t be scared. I’ll be with you the whole time. I’ll take care of you. You trust me, right?”
With a choked laugh, Foggy nodded. Matt was a demon, a being whose real name could make his ears bleed from the unearthly sounds, a being whose existence was to convince suckers to sign over their souls to him.
It didn’t change a thing.
“God help me, but I do. You—you’re the best thing that ever happened to me,” Foggy whispered.
Matt smiled. “Then let’s go.”
I’m gonna CRY. OH GODS.
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-08 04:45 am (UTC)(link)Hahahahaa, I wish I could write all night. XD I'm so so hooked on this prompt like you don't even KNOW. Unfortunately, I've got a day of meetings tomorrow at work and an engagement after, so I don't think I'll have much time to work on part 2 until Thursday. :(
Yeah good luck trying to convince yourself you’re not falling in the demon equivalent of love with Foggy, dude.
--- Oh, Matt. You never stood a chance. XD
Not even in the underworld and you’re eating his food. NICE GOING FOGGY.
--- OMG I DIDN'T EVEN MAKE THAT PARTICULAR CONNECTION. DAMMIT. THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO PERFECT. I am so adding pomegranates to Foggy's fridge for the cleaned up AO3 version. XD
Gods this is such a great story you’re conveying here. Seriously.
--- ;___; Thank you thank you! I would have delved more into their time alive, except, well. I really wanted to get to Foggy dying. XD Because I'm awful. *nod* BUT DAVE THE MINION AWAITS.
Your comments during Foggy's pre-death meltdown GAVE ME LIFE, SERIOUSLY, I am laughing so freaking hard. XD
Hang on … Matt is the Devil here, right? Not just some random demon? He’s actually Satan, right?
--- Yes, he is totally Satan. XD He just didn't want to TELL Foggy that because they were all cozy and familiar with each other, and it was nice for someone to just treat him like an equal rather than a terrifying overlord of infernal justice and wrath. :D Also, Matt is bad with words when it comes to navigating the social mindfield of friendship. XD Foggy will find out soon enough.
Oooooo, I love that. That Matt’s human suit is slipping.
--- *cackles* Yup! XD He figures it doesn't matter anymore, all the cards (well, almost all the cards) will be on the table shortly. XD
Ok, 1) my heart is breaking 2) I’m really getting off on this and 3) Matt you asshole did you FORGET to tell Foggy you’re not just dumping him in a lava pit when this is over?
--- See above re: Matt + words + friendship = WHATTHEEVERLOVINGFUCKMURDOCK. XD But really, it was more like, the first few years Matt himself didn't quite have a plan in mind for Foggy's soul yet, and by the time he did he'd been stringing him along with pretty platitudes of "Don't worry" and "It'll be fine" for SO LONG that he doesn't know how to backtrack. :P GOOD JOB, MATTHIWHISTLEHISSIZZLE.
I’m gonna CRY. OH GODS.
--- *cackles* Every admission of near-tears is like sweet, sweet wine to me. ;D
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-08 08:15 am (UTC)(link)(Author here, still SHRIEKING INTO MY PILLOW AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS)
Awww, you're too kind! Thank you!
Hahahahaa, I wish I could write all night. XD I'm so so hooked on this prompt like you don't even KNOW. Unfortunately, I've got a day of meetings tomorrow at work and an engagement after, so I don't think I'll have much time to work on part 2 until Thursday. :(
That's fine, I can wait, I got plenty to do myself. Worth the wait.
Maybe like, take notes so you don't forget you ideas by Thursday?
--- Oh, Matt. You never stood a chance. XD
Not a chance at all. Ahahahaha.
--- OMG I DIDN'T EVEN MAKE THAT PARTICULAR CONNECTION. DAMMIT. THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO PERFECT. I am so adding pomegranates to Foggy's fridge for the cleaned up AO3 version. XD
I'm just hyper vigilant about that sort of thing because I'm really into the Persephone myth.
Yay pomegranates! : D
--- ;___; Thank you thank you! I would have delved more into their time alive, except, well. I really wanted to get to Foggy dying. XD Because I'm awful. *nod* BUT DAVE THE MINION AWAITS.
I think it was just enough background, really. You detailed their first meeting, which is super important, summarized the years to give us a sense of what their friendship was like, and then detailed the night Foggy died. Worked perfectly in my opinion.
I really wanted to get to Foggy's death too, I was waiting on that so eagerly. Because I have dark kinks.
Yes, DAVE THE
WAR BOYDEMON AWAITS!Your comments during Foggy's pre-death meltdown GAVE ME LIFE, SERIOUSLY, I am laughing so freaking hard. XD
Anguish, arousal, and delight. So many emotions from me for that scene, seriously. Good job. : D
--- Yes, he is totally Satan. XD He just didn't want to TELL Foggy that because they were all cozy and familiar with each other, and it was nice for someone to just treat him like an equal rather than a terrifying overlord of infernal justice and wrath. :D Also, Matt is bad with words when it comes to navigating the social mindfield of friendship. XD Foggy will find out soon enough.
Oh my gods yes yes yessssssss. I love that trope, where someone big and badass and scary is like, normal with their friend or lover, and then the other person finds out their dark secret. And it usually never ends well but I prefer it where the person is like "... awesome" or turned on about it.
Well there really is no good way to say "BTW I am Satan, er, so ... yeah."
--- *cackles* Yup! XD He figures it doesn't matter anymore, all the cards (well, almost all the cards) will be on the table shortly. XD
Oh Matt. He's so terrible at this. Though, to be fair, he's never done this before I suspect.
--- See above re: Matt + words + friendship = WHATTHEEVERLOVINGFUCKMURDOCK. XD But really, it was more like, the first few years Matt himself didn't quite have a plan in mind for Foggy's soul yet, and by the time he did he'd been stringing him along with pretty platitudes of "Don't worry" and "It'll be fine" for SO LONG that he doesn't know how to backtrack. :P
Oh Matt. NOT telling him was so much worse. Even just saying "hey when it's time, I'm not gonna pitch you in lava or something, you'll be safe, you'll still be with me" and Foggy would have probably not believed him but still, at least it'd have been something. Oh Matt.
GOOD JOB, MATTHIWHISTLEHISSIZZLE
I laughed so hard at the Mathiwistlehissizzle thing, by the way.
--- *cackles* Every admission of near-tears is like sweet, sweet wine to me. ;D
I know, right? Usually I'm on the other side of this sort of conversation, making other people wail with my fic. Interesting being on this side again.
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-08 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)No, I'm super into the Persephone myth as well (and Foggy and Matt are SO FREAKING HADESEPHONE down to the demons eventually being more scared of FOGGY than Matt), which is why I'm hitting my head on a wall that I missed it!
I'm so happy the pacing of the story is working for you and doesn't feel like too much of a drag. :D YAY FOGGY'S DEATH. \o/ ON TO EVER AFTERRR.
Well there really is no good way to say "BTW I am Satan, er, so ... yeah."
--- Yup, that is basically exactly what Matt figured. :P Like canon!Matt keeping the mask a secret from Foggy. "Well, I'm fucked either way, so..."
Oh Matt. NOT telling him was so much worse. Even just saying "hey when it's time, I'm not gonna pitch you in lava or something, you'll be safe, you'll still be with me"
--- Yeah, Matt isn't exactly a good example of a well-adjusted, communicative, reasonable person. :P To be fair, he's been the ruler of Hell for millennia - he hasn't had to answer to someone else or explain his actions since being thrown out of/walking away from Heaven... :P
I laughed so hard at the Mathiwistlehissizzle thing, by the way.
--- Thank you! :D Initially I had Foggy refer to him as that for most of the chapter, but it started getting really redundant and obnoxious, so I just switched all but the first to "the Demon," heheh.
Interesting being on this side again.
--- LUCKY ME. SERIOUSLY. I AM SO HAPPY.
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-09 12:28 am (UTC)(link)Oh, my Google document is scattered with notes and snippets, no worries. :P I'll be out of town without internet Friday through Sunday, though, so while I'll start working on part 2 properly on Thursday, it probably won't get wrapped up until next week at the earliest (depending on how badly the muse runs away with me)! I know you said you're not big on tracking works in progress, so I'm going to try to get part 2 complete before posting it. :D (Although I suppose I can always poke you on Tumblr to let you know of updates, haha…?)
No no, I can track WIP just fine, I’m terrible at writing them myself though. I tend to do oneshots or rarely a trilogy or something. A series though, usually defeats me. I can keep up with them just fine though. Write at your own pace, I have plenty I can keep occupied with.
No, I'm super into the Persephone myth as well (and Foggy and Matt are SO FREAKING HADESEPHONE down to the demons eventually being more scared of FOGGY than Matt), which is why I'm hitting my head on a wall that I missed it!
It’s fine, honestly. The beauty of transitions from kink meme to AO3.
I'm so happy the pacing of the story is working for you and doesn't feel like too much of a drag. :D YAY FOGGY'S DEATH. \o/ ON TO EVER AFTERRR.
Yeah, just the right balance I think. It has to have that build-up to make the rest of it have impact.
— Yup, that is basically exactly what Matt figured. :P Like canon!Matt keeping the mask a secret from Foggy. "Well, I'm fucked either way, so…”
Yeah, kept putting it off until later, like that would make things better somehow (no, no it won’t Matt.)
— Yeah, Matt isn't exactly a good example of a well-adjusted, communicative, reasonable person. :P To be fair, he's been the ruler of Hell for millennia - he hasn't had to answer to someone else or explain his actions since being thrown out of/walking away from Heaven... :P
Ahahahahahah. He hasn’t had someone to answer to for a long time … UNTIL NOW.
*cue Foggy yelling in the distance*
— Thank you! :D Initially I had Foggy refer to him as that for most of the chapter, but it started getting really redundant and obnoxious, so I just switched all but the first to "the Demon," heheh.
It works. Funny the few times it’s mentioned though.
— LUCKY ME. SERIOUSLY. I AM SO HAPPY.
Glad I could make you happy with my comments! : D
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-09 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)Ahahahahahah. He hasn’t had someone to answer to for a long time … UNTIL NOW.
*cue Foggy yelling in the distance*
--- "GOD BLESS IT, MATTHEW, I TOLD YOU TO PICK UP THE ORGANIC MILK ON THE WAY HOME FROM REAPING SOULS."
... i'M SORRY, that was the first thing that came to mind. xD
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-10 01:43 am (UTC)(link)I will not forget about this, don't worry about me. I'll check in periodically.
Good luck with next week!
--- "GOD BLESS IT, MATTHEW, I TOLD YOU TO PICK UP THE ORGANIC MILK ON THE WAY HOME FROM REAPING SOULS."
... i'M SORRY, that was the first thing that came to mind. xD
Ahahahaa.
I meant more like, Foggy getting really angry about the brutality in Hell, and chewing Matt out. And then realizing seconds later that he was yelling at SATAN.
Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]
(Anonymous) 2015-07-10 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)Hahahaha, I know what you meant, but my brain is fluffy and silly and loves throwing totally mundane shit into epic environments, so it went the silly route. ;)