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looking for a beta :3

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I just reposted a fill to ao3 here - http://archiveofourown.org/works/4192815

Some kind anons already pointed out a load of the britishisms I've got in there, but I'd love it if someone could pick through and catch any others? This is also the longest thing I've ever written in present tense so I'd be freaking amazed if there aren't continuity issues.

Also also also, I feel like the quality of my writing plummets whenever I write porn (and a majority of this is porn) so if someone could let me know if/where I'm going wrong on that front I'd be super grateful.

It's fine if you don't have time to do the whole fic - even just having a second pair of eyes for the second half of the +1 would be really helpful.

My email is ceebiccy@gmail.com

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