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Re: Concrit Thread

[(Anonymous)]

Author anon - I'm not sure how to avoid the head hopping as some of the chapters make sense from the different points of view, so is there any way I can make that more clear?

Re: Concrit Thread

[(Anonymous)]

If you switch POV's in each chapter, it shouldn't be a problem. That's a natural break, and the reader can go along with it. It's only a problem when it happens in the middle of a chapter. Just make sure you identify the main character for each chapter, ideally in the first sentence or two, so that the reader knows which POV to expect, and you should be all right.

Re: Concrit Thread

[(Anonymous)]

Okay, thanks! Hopefully, with the rewrites, the chapters will get longer, but I'm not the best at writing long chapters so...Thanks again for all your help! You are the best. :)