Someone wrote in [community profile] daredevilkink 2024-08-01 06:18 pm (UTC)

PLOT - answer 5 (plot-points step by step, p.1)

Yeah, we should probably cut Stick out. For now at least.

I think there's a few plots/plot-points we can add to the list, though. So, let's revisit. For now we have:

  • Matt arrives at Fisk mantion
  • Matt gets assaulted on the first day
  • Introduce Weasley, brings food
  • Start Matt on menial tasks
  • Meets Juana during menial tasks?
  • Meets most of the lower-tier (menial tasks et al) slaves in the mansion
  • Is generally amazed at how many random people seem to wander around with little to do (maybe? or maybe not, maybe James is better at finding them jobs than that. But I think that Matt would notice something, like maybe that there's too many people for too little work. James is good at his job but Fisk is a hoarder, at some point you just run out of space)
  • Has conversation with Juana about him (and so many others) being a stock-asset slave
  • James finally comes around and gives Matt a more-or-less routine role (and now I'm thinking that maybe he has him type audiobooks into braille or something, just to sit him down and not think about it xD (for blind children and puppies, of course))
  • Actually, the Braille idea might (sort-of) work. It might (slowly?) pull him to the offices and put him to work there
  • Where Karen also works (maybe)
  • Not that it matters, they don't talk and generally either don't see or ignore each other on account of one of them being a slave
  • I imagine this is where Matt overhears comments and experiences 'workplace harrassment' from free office staff
  • (I think he sleeps in communal slave-quarters in the mansion during that time, still interacting with 'menial tasks' people he met before, which gives him a reprieve from the total isolation (?) of the office)
  • Office harrassment goes to a head just in time for Weasley to see it
  • (Not attempted rape or direct violence like Day One, but definitely touching and comments, maybe approaching coersion)
  • Weasley interrupts. Coldly.
  • We decide if that person is ever heard from again (probably not, or not from pleasant places) (does Weasley make him into an example??? Probably also not, that'd be too public, oh well)
  • Either way, Weasley came to bring Matt to his first Meeting.

How am I doing so far?


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