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enthusiasmgirl ([personal profile] enthusiasmgirl) wrote in [community profile] daredevilkink 2016-01-03 07:46 pm (UTC)

Re: Frank/Matt Ryker's AU

To clarify, only SOME of the above would count as mini-fills because they are clearly prose.

So the below:

"And whenever Matt gets anywhere near any obstacle, Frank tells him softly what it is, runs a hand through Matt's hair, his hand coming down to gently cup his ass, make him squeak...

Meanwhile Matt is listening in on everyone's prison conversations, detecting plans, because he can afford to just let Frank guide him and not use his senses for that part at the moment."


would be considered a mini-fill, both points-wise and towards the 1000 words.

But this comment:

Someone gets the bright idea to get Frank sent to solitary.
The first time someone tries to fuck with the blind guy, they find that he can still locate their balls with his knee


would not be.

Does that make sense to everyone and sound fair? One is actual writing, the other reads more like a plot suggestion.

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