This is a really nice fill and I like a lot of things about it. However there is one big problem I noticed at the start that kind of pulled me out of the story. I don't think it would be to hard for you to fix if you ever re-write this but it is rather glaring.
Anyway the thing I noticed is the you have five people get hit with the ray. Thor get turned into a baby and apparently acts like one whilst Matt become his nine year old self both mentally and physically. however the other three(Steve, Tony and Clint)get de-aged into adults of different ages but don't mentally regress and there's no explanation why.
As I said I'm sure you could find a reason for them to keep their memories or just change them getting hit. It's your story I just had to point this out in case you didn't notice.
Re: Fill: Eyas
Anyway the thing I noticed is the you have five people get hit with the ray. Thor get turned into a baby and apparently acts like one whilst Matt become his nine year old self both mentally and physically. however the other three(Steve, Tony and Clint)get de-aged into adults of different ages but don't mentally regress and there's no explanation why.
As I said I'm sure you could find a reason for them to keep their memories or just change them getting hit. It's your story I just had to point this out in case you didn't notice.
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