Someone wrote in [community profile] daredevilkink 2015-07-24 01:13 am (UTC)

Re: Fill: Through Loving Eyes-Matt/Foggy, mirror sex

I LOVE established relationship, fluffy fic <3 gosh, this is so beautiful!! All the banter, all the laughter, yes!! I also loved all the set up, matt being a romantic doofus and getting all nervous and thinking about how he fucked up the wine lol

I also loved that you went for a different take on the fic and instead of any of them being insecure. I usually find that kind of dialogue (i.e. "you don't know how beautiful you are right now", "I wish you could see yourself", etc) a bit awkward to read, but this was perfect! I loved that it was filled with feelings ("I wish you wouldn't get hurt") and that you also put in some humor in it (I laughed so hard at Foggy's "want to grate cheese on your abs" comment)

Also, fellow ace here! Yay! I like my porn to be all fluffy and full of feelings and this was absolutely perfect! Bravo!

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