Ugh, brain fade. I always forget to update the WIP thread but I will jump on that right now- thanks for the reminder.
And thank you too for the feedback; I'm always concerned with trying to keep the voices recognizable in such new contexts so it's always good to hear when that is actually succeeding.
"Infernal passenger", I do like your turn of phrase and it couldn't be more apt. That's one of the things I really wanted to play with, Matt's humanity, that is. He's so concerned with it in the show, but he always has that little edge of temptation I kind of want him to step over.
All that said, I'm glad you're enjoying so much and here's the next entry! :)
Re: The Devil's Due Part 1.4
And thank you too for the feedback; I'm always concerned with trying to keep the voices recognizable in such new contexts so it's always good to hear when that is actually succeeding.
"Infernal passenger", I do like your turn of phrase and it couldn't be more apt. That's one of the things I really wanted to play with, Matt's humanity, that is. He's so concerned with it in the show, but he always has that little edge of temptation I kind of want him to step over.
All that said, I'm glad you're enjoying so much and here's the next entry! :)