I accidentally clicked the wrong button and sent this out before revising it.

I'm a perfectionist and normally read and re-read my pieces several times, changing pace and wording here and there. But I figure confusing you with two almost-but-not-quite the same versions of a chapter is worse than just letting it stand, so...

Here it is :)



(Yes, I did re-read and revise this comment. A few times. Perfectionist)