Skye and Matt both went to St Agnes orphanage. I want to see something where they were there at the same time and knew each other. You can write about when they were at the orphanage or have them meeting again later in life, but I want some exploration of that shared life experience.

It might also be interesting to explore their different takes on faith (though not in a way that vilifies their beliefs), what with Matt being a Catholic with extra-emphasis on the guilt, who feels like he had the Devil inside of him, whereas Skye is presumably an Athiest who didn't like the Nuns' pushing the Devine Punishment idea, but always liked the interpretation that "God is Love".