Ahh, this is such a great fill! You've got a great Karen voice, so in-character! I really enjoyed seeing this from her POV. And the part where she told Graham about the email was my favorite, I totally felt that vindictive joy with her. xD
I'm really intrigued by Graham. It took me a bit of thinking to realize it, but he kind of reminds me of Foggy? Like, a similar sense of humor and self-deprecating charm? IDK if that's what you're going for, or if I'm just way off base. Anyway, him being kind of Foggy-like, but so unlike Foggy at the same time gives him a nice, extra layer of eeriness.
This is a great start, I'm so excited to see how this turns out. Thanks so much for filling my prompt!
Re: Fill: It Doesn't Knock (part 1)
Ahh, this is such a great fill! You've got a great Karen voice, so in-character! I really enjoyed seeing this from her POV. And the part where she told Graham about the email was my favorite, I totally felt that vindictive joy with her. xD
I'm really intrigued by Graham. It took me a bit of thinking to realize it, but he kind of reminds me of Foggy? Like, a similar sense of humor and self-deprecating charm? IDK if that's what you're going for, or if I'm just way off base. Anyway, him being kind of Foggy-like, but so unlike Foggy at the same time gives him a nice, extra layer of eeriness.
This is a great start, I'm so excited to see how this turns out. Thanks so much for filling my prompt!