Oh heavens *fans self* I adore you, author!anon. It's not shit at all; maybe a bit disjointed, but it actually kind of reminds me of nights where I've been under the influence (not sex pollen, of course, but still) and I faded in and out of focusing on events. I'm certainly not going to turn *down* more writing, but I am enjoying what you've shared thus far. :D

--OP