um. no YOU are the best anon. (seriously, when writing porn on the internet, i think all anyone really wants is to be told "you did the sex talk real good" and "gadzooks, forsooth, thy prose!" so like. this is my day right here.)
BUT! i did fuck up that earlier bit: pegging, omg, pegging is amazing and i want all of it - when I wrote that little bit implying that pegging is not "real" anal, I was. hm. I think I was going for "pegging is awesome but a lil complicated, and I want a mood where everyone is drugged-up-happy and not terribly coordinated," and i didn't mean to. y'know.
of course now i have half a scene where karen's got three fingers up matt's hootnanny and claire offers her dildo, again, because whew, she is a nurse, you don't wanna give yourself tendinitis, karen.
Re: Matt/Claire/Karen/Foggy: sex pollen, teamwork more more
(seriously, when writing porn on the internet, i think all anyone really wants is to be told "you did the sex talk real good" and "gadzooks, forsooth, thy prose!" so like. this is my day right here.)
BUT! i did fuck up that earlier bit: pegging, omg, pegging is amazing and i want all of it - when I wrote that little bit implying that pegging is not "real" anal, I was. hm. I think I was going for "pegging is awesome but a lil complicated, and I want a mood where everyone is drugged-up-happy and not terribly coordinated," and i didn't mean to. y'know.
of course now i have half a scene where karen's got three fingers up matt's hootnanny and claire offers her dildo, again, because whew, she is a nurse, you don't wanna give yourself tendinitis, karen.
it needs a push, tho: line, please, director!