Someone wrote in [community profile] daredevilkink 2015-05-13 01:49 am (UTC)

Re: Fill: tell me how all this will ruin us 2/2

i wish that i had something, ANYTHING more intelligent to say than "mom holy fuck" but MOM, HOLY FUCK

this was probably hands down one of the most painful things i ever had to read and this is coming from someone who has read foggy getting kidnapped and beaten within an inch of his life, PROBABLY because at least then i knew matt would save him, but this? this is something else entirely. daredevil can't punch fucking cancer. matt's comfort is all he can offer but what matt wants to do is take action and this is the one thing he's powerless to help.

i really enjoyed foggy's characterization here too, the line "you trying to rile me up, mr. murdock?" as well as his halfhearted jokes really struck me because foggy's absolutely been proven to joke even when in pain -- the part where he got struck by shrapnel from one of the explosions specifically.

generally really good work and GOOD JOB BREAKING MY DAMN HEART.

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