Someone wrote in [community profile] daredevilkink 2015-07-08 08:15 am (UTC)

Re: Requiem Æternam [Part 1.3]

(Prompter here)

(Author here, still SHRIEKING INTO MY PILLOW AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENTS)
Awww, you're too kind! Thank you!

Hahahahaa, I wish I could write all night. XD I'm so so hooked on this prompt like you don't even KNOW. Unfortunately, I've got a day of meetings tomorrow at work and an engagement after, so I don't think I'll have much time to work on part 2 until Thursday. :(
That's fine, I can wait, I got plenty to do myself. Worth the wait.
Maybe like, take notes so you don't forget you ideas by Thursday?

--- Oh, Matt. You never stood a chance. XD
Not a chance at all. Ahahahaha.

--- OMG I DIDN'T EVEN MAKE THAT PARTICULAR CONNECTION. DAMMIT. THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN SO PERFECT. I am so adding pomegranates to Foggy's fridge for the cleaned up AO3 version. XD
I'm just hyper vigilant about that sort of thing because I'm really into the Persephone myth.
Yay pomegranates! : D

--- ;___; Thank you thank you! I would have delved more into their time alive, except, well. I really wanted to get to Foggy dying. XD Because I'm awful. *nod* BUT DAVE THE MINION AWAITS.
I think it was just enough background, really. You detailed their first meeting, which is super important, summarized the years to give us a sense of what their friendship was like, and then detailed the night Foggy died. Worked perfectly in my opinion.
I really wanted to get to Foggy's death too, I was waiting on that so eagerly. Because I have dark kinks.
Yes, DAVE THE WAR BOY DEMON AWAITS!

Your comments during Foggy's pre-death meltdown GAVE ME LIFE, SERIOUSLY, I am laughing so freaking hard. XD
Anguish, arousal, and delight. So many emotions from me for that scene, seriously. Good job. : D

--- Yes, he is totally Satan. XD He just didn't want to TELL Foggy that because they were all cozy and familiar with each other, and it was nice for someone to just treat him like an equal rather than a terrifying overlord of infernal justice and wrath. :D Also, Matt is bad with words when it comes to navigating the social mindfield of friendship. XD Foggy will find out soon enough.
Oh my gods yes yes yessssssss. I love that trope, where someone big and badass and scary is like, normal with their friend or lover, and then the other person finds out their dark secret. And it usually never ends well but I prefer it where the person is like "... awesome" or turned on about it.
Well there really is no good way to say "BTW I am Satan, er, so ... yeah."

--- *cackles* Yup! XD He figures it doesn't matter anymore, all the cards (well, almost all the cards) will be on the table shortly. XD
Oh Matt. He's so terrible at this. Though, to be fair, he's never done this before I suspect.

--- See above re: Matt + words + friendship = WHATTHEEVERLOVINGFUCKMURDOCK. XD But really, it was more like, the first few years Matt himself didn't quite have a plan in mind for Foggy's soul yet, and by the time he did he'd been stringing him along with pretty platitudes of "Don't worry" and "It'll be fine" for SO LONG that he doesn't know how to backtrack. :P
Oh Matt. NOT telling him was so much worse. Even just saying "hey when it's time, I'm not gonna pitch you in lava or something, you'll be safe, you'll still be with me" and Foggy would have probably not believed him but still, at least it'd have been something. Oh Matt.

GOOD JOB, MATTHIWHISTLEHISSIZZLE
I laughed so hard at the Mathiwistlehissizzle thing, by the way.

--- *cackles* Every admission of near-tears is like sweet, sweet wine to me. ;D
I know, right? Usually I'm on the other side of this sort of conversation, making other people wail with my fic. Interesting being on this side again.

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