Someone wrote in [community profile] daredevilkink 2015-06-24 07:56 pm (UTC)

Re: FILL: For a Brief Moment (2/?)

author!anon -

I hope it isn't too negative! I mean personally I think Matt takes the whole Catholic guilt thing a bit far.

Like yeah, Fuck Maggie, that shit is seriously messed up. When I looked it up to find the reason she left to use it in this I was actually startled by how much it actually fit. Like she actually is a horrible lady!!? I didn't even read that part about when they saw each other again but I went back and read it and seriously?? Matt was basically just life, "My life is pretty bad" and she slapped him and he apologized????????? ??? ?

Like I wanted the letter to just be worded as if she had thought Jack and her's babymakin' had been a sin in general, not Matt himself. But Matt of course would twist that around in his head.

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